by Cas Blomberg
What works well with this piece? What stands out?
How do you feel about the dialogue? Was it authentic? Engaging?
Did each character project a unique voice?
Did each character's motivations stand out?
Which character did you identify with the most and why?
How do you feel about the level of depth in the characters?
Which three words would you use to describe the protagonist? Or antagonist?
Did you trust the narrator? Was he or she consistent throughout the piece?
What did you think about the balance between exposition, dialogue, and action?
Do you think the structure works? Did the scenes lead into each other?
Were any events out of order, and if so, did that work?
Did you feel as if any scenes were missing?
Did you know where the story was going?
What was your favorite scene or line?
How did you feel about the tension the author created? Did you want more, less, or was it perfect?
Which themes could you identify in the piece?
Did you pick up on any symbolism? Do you think it adds to, or detracts from, the story?
Which sensory details spoke to you the most?
Did the narrator reveal too much information?
What did you think of the pacing? Too fast? Not enough time to breathe? Perfect? Too slow?
What would you like to see more of?